Sun is rising at morning we love to see,
Sun is falling at evening we say goodbye,
Giving us emotion this day passes away,
In between morning and evening we stay.
We stay in hope, we stay in brightness,
We move in new direction to initiate love,
We are here and we are there to witness,
Miracle this sun does really many think.
Many of us are rising towards God to meet,
Many are falling in vices and going so far,
But all are searching for happiness in between,
Truth is one trust is one in positive vibrations.
Positively we rise and fall only for God is good,
Being conscious we awake conscience is nice,
Motivating life in way of truth we proceed,
In life we feel and see rising and falling always.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,25 August,2017. All rights reserved.
If there is a fall sure there will be a rise.. Success is the outcome of failures Well written
The rise and fall. A wonderfully written poem about life in its entirety. The ups and downs.
I like your analogy between the sun rising and setting, and human virtues and vices, which are in conflict within each person. 'Only God is good' and free of conflict. Your poem reminds me not to take the sun for granted, as it rises and sets each day.
This sun! ! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Sun is rising at morning we love to see, Sun is falling at evening we say goodbye, wonderfully written, thank you for sharing the poem with us
- -Many of us are rising towards God to meet, Many are falling in vices and going so far, But all are searching for happiness in between, Truth is one trust is one in positive vibrations- - - These are beautiful and very true lines and over all here lies a great poem. Thanks for sharing. Stay blessed.
Amazing observation of how necessary we should learn from nature, this is the reason why we should...i like how soft your words persuading in such big content..its a wonderful read
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There is always something positive to see. Every fall results in a rise.