M. Asim Nehal

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Rubaiyat - On Love.. - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Love is a deep sea and mirage in desert
no swimmer has ever crossed or reached oasis
nor found the pearls of peace
or inner tranquility and contentment.

Topic(s) of this poem: rubaiyat

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Rubaiyat - On Love.. by M. Asim Nehal

  • (10/25/2015 1:47:00 PM)

    Deep sea and desert with oasis..Great thought wise wor Asim. (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (10/23/2015 10:37:00 AM)

    There is pleasure and pain in love! Sometimes it is like an unfathomable sea, sometimes elusive as a mirage in the desert! You have really captured the complexity of love in these lines! (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/23/2015 6:45:00 AM)

    Love is a wonderful phenomena. Sometimes, it brings to us the biggest of joys and on others, it looks like an illusion, an unreal world, an insatiable thirst. Very well said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (10/23/2015 4:15:00 AM)

    beautifully sad but the pleasure is in the trying
    Thanks Asim-10++
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/23/2015 1:46:00 AM)

    Yes you have truly realized. Love is definitely a deep sea. Very interesting composition shared...10 (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/23/2015 1:34:00 AM)

    Sad one, still amazing as usual.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Brian Mayo (10/23/2015 12:14:00 AM)

    A bleak outlook on love, but if that's not a viewpoint made for poetry, nothing is.
    I like your poem.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 22, 2015

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