......Runaway Thoughts Poem by Meggie Gultiano

......Runaway Thoughts

Rating: 3.3


Be stilled by a mouth of prayers
As I sing my blues away
Hearing your sighs of brokenness
I lay dead on these runaway thoughts
Choosing on forever's dream
And drinking the 'eyes' of 'whys'
Reasons I call subdued
By the colors of her runaway thoughts
Stilled by a foaming mouth of the sea

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Beckham 09 July 2010

The switch in thought, is like switching gear. In an ever changing world, a switch in time is saves nine! lol...great work! !

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Kesav Easwaran 11 July 2010

'Hearing your sighs of brokenness I lay dead on these runaway thoughts'... Meaningfully allusive...reads most poetic...good work...10

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Merry Virgo 28 July 2010

well...nice written poh... with an emotionally stated: D MORE power to your writing career .......merrypens....♥ w/love: D

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Catherine Yen 26 July 2010

Beautiful and imsaginative.

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Louis Rams 25 July 2010

when we kneel down to pray, our runaway thoughts just go astray and if we can get up in time, then you know you're doing fine. VERY WELL WRITTEN! LUVVVV IT!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 July 2010

Hearing your sighs of brokenness I lay dead on these runaway thoughts, ......passionately allusive, yet by deeper meaning,10+, thanks for sharing

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Dove Allen 12 July 2010

Beautiful...very spiritual in nature...a requiem of submission to peace

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