Rusty Year Retiring Poem by Joshua Adeyemi

Rusty Year Retiring

Rating: 3.8

weary waves whooshing
hoisted horizons hankering
dark dances drooling
felon fate fostering
airy atmosphere amputating
salient seas scrunching

mystic melody moaning
fiery figs feigning
voluptuous veils vying

callous crest crumbling
rustic rays reeling
lusty labium leering

tactic tiers tearing
rusty year retiring.
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Rusty Year Retiring
Tuesday, December 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: new year
Edward Kofi Louis 01 February 2020

Tearing! ! ! Mystic melody! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Harley White 01 February 2020

Interesting use of alliteration...

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 February 2020

mystic melody moaning fiery figs feigning voluptuous veils vying.. very fine poem dear poet. tony

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Kingsley Egbukole 01 January 2020

Saying bye to 2019 and welcoming 2020. Beautiful...10.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 February 2020

Beautiful New Year Poem Penned// /// Last Years All last years now in rusted retiring now in torn covering now in tattered, shattered, scattered swoon for nothing else Beautiful Sun for beautiful dawn Sun shining for New Year day coming for New Year Resolution////////

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 February 2020

A well composed fascinating poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece.....10++++

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Matt Starking 01 February 2020

Wow adeyemi you are good with using words to make a sound and meaning, keep writing

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Rini Shibu 01 February 2020

Interesting poem..congratulations

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 February 2020

With its clever wordplay and rhyming it makes very interesting reading. Enjoyed reading. Congrats.

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