Sacrifice Poem by ANJANDEV ROY

Sacrifice

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I knew the greedy traveller very well,
He travelled throughout his life
In search of wealth and affluence,
He succeeded in his mission
And amassed a lot of wealth,
But his greed never diminished,
It increased days after days,
Gradually the covetous wayfarer became weary and frustrated,
Then he said to himself,
"What's the utility of the riches, if it can not give peace and stability in my life? "
Therefore one day he donated all his wealth
To a reputed welfare organization of his nation,
Thus the tired traveller became truly relieved at the end,
He understood the value of sacrifice in life

Tuesday, May 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: sacrifice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 03 October 2020

This is an excellent poem dear Anjandev! I never hesitate to visit this cute little poem time and again!

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 December 2020

amassed a lot of wealth, But his greed never diminished, It increased days after days, Gradually the covetous wayfarer became weary and frustrated, The great question: of What use is this riches? sublime and noble theme. tony

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Riches are nothing, if it is not used for the most needy person. And what worth is a sacrifice, if the person for whom we make it does not deserve it! What life is it if we live oblivious of the one who needs your care around you.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 December 2021

brilliantly excellent

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2021

Then he said to himself.....

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Isadora Quagmire 30 May 2025

Once again well delivered! Great and profound message : )

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Koffi B Sossou 05 November 2023

'The money that we possess is the instrument of liberty, that which we lack and strive to obtain is the instrument of slavery.' Jean-Jacques Rousseau

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Pallavi Tripathi 14 March 2023

It has Rene Girard written all over it

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 21 February 2023

Peace is the greatest wealth. Good poem

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soren Barrett 24 April 2022

Although not Hindu I feel that the last step of a Brahmin to become a sanyasi giving up all their wealth to wander as a beggar in the streets is learning step that would be good for all.

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