sad...
man grows old too soon
even when the whole world
stands there afresh to remind him
of a birth
every day
every minute
every second
as a new birth
sad indeed....
man grows old too soon
i guess it is a way fro all to live to get a chance? true poem
since the beginning of the man he has been trying to prolong his life but all in vain
You are reminding me of my old age through this poem. Thanks.
Sad... man grows old too soon Indeed....so true....liked your thought process...
MFD* is just a number! LOL! ! Number mustn’t make us sad. Ten for not for MFD* but for the concept. niv. Invite to read and comment on my poems and…. niv *Manufacturing date
Hold back the hand of time so that I can be young forever. Excellently expressed my friend.10+
you said it, man grows old to soon. but this poem does not go old with us. a ten
Before our eyes people get old, older........we also get older..........the mirror starts singgering at us......I too often felt of this phenomenon........when I look at our near and dear people.......good write.........your strokes are getting more and more philosophical and profound my friend.
It's a sad fact, Sam...a cycle of life...to be born, live, die...a new life begins for someone and will experience the same fate. So it's important for us to enjoy our life as we all know it will end up soon. Sensible write! :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i liked the concept inside this write...thanks