THE MOON IS INDEED A LONELY FACE! BUT ON A FULL MOON NIGHT IT BECOMES A LOVELY, BEAUTIFUL FACE!
Various people view the moon in different ways! In a place without electricity,
the moon provides its light! For the lovers and madman it has its own charm!
But for the hungry and destitude of this world it is a vision of a rolled out bread!
I have written a poem on the same! 10! - Raj Nandy
Dear Lady Grace,
Thanks for your invite to comment upon your poem 'sadness'
Its a solemnised emotion expressed with exquisite imageries
and heart-feli emotion.Good write.Good rating; A-9--Rajkumar
N.B.-Sugession for improvement in last two lines-choice is yours:
epitome of lonely face
stands alone in grace.
i felt this poem rather than read it..cant help reading this poem without its image appearing in ones mind as described...im not resitant to feeling sadness if its done this way so beautifully.. :) tom