lady grace

Sadness

look at the stars
so dim in the sky....

have you seen the moon?
it's a picture of a lonely face...

Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 4, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 14, 2009

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  • S Phant0m (10/11/2009 1:47:00 AM)

    Love this. thank you for sharing.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/19/2009 11:39:00 PM)

    look at the stars
    so dim in the sky....moon is alone but gioves you so much coolness in return.. it is symbolic gesture on her part.. but the poem is so lovely wuth good rhythm and message....10

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  • Raj Nandy (7/15/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    THE MOON IS INDEED A LONELY FACE! BUT ON A FULL MOON NIGHT IT BECOMES A LOVELY, BEAUTIFUL FACE!
    Various people view the moon in different ways! In a place without electricity,
    the moon provides its light! For the lovers and madman it has its own charm!
    But for the hungry and destitude of this world it is a vision of a rolled out bread!
    I have written a poem on the same! 10! - Raj Nandy

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  • rago rago (7/7/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    sometimes sadness take our breath out to think it over again and again.......I love the write it is absolutely a good picture of write.........

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  • Carol-Anne SpaldingCarol-Anne Spalding (7/7/2009 10:59:00 AM)

    My Goddess, this is an absolute gem of a poem....one I can especially relate to at the moment....well done, such the talent

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  • Lynda Robson (7/7/2009 8:38:00 AM)

    Meaningful and very lovely poem Grace, thanks
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (7/7/2009 7:39:00 AM)

    inviting imagery...thanks Grace...10

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  • Marquel Walker (7/5/2009 10:50:00 PM)

    nice poem... deep meaning

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  • Bob Gibson (7/5/2009 2:37:00 PM)

    The stars are still bright, in the dark of the night, and the moon is still smiling too
    i don't mean to be rude, but perhaps its your mood? maybe your just feeling blue!

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  • Rajkumar MukherjeeRajkumar Mukherjee (7/5/2009 5:16:00 AM)

    Dear Lady Grace,
    Thanks for your invite to comment upon your poem 'sadness'
    Its a solemnised emotion expressed with exquisite imageries
    and heart-feli emotion.Good write.Good rating; A-9--Rajkumar
    N.B.-Sugession for improvement in last two lines-choice is yours:
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    crescent moon
    epitome of lonely face
    stands alone in grace.
    Rajkumar

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  • Raj ArumugamRaj Arumugam (7/5/2009 3:16:00 AM)

    beautiful imagery presented with a specific emotion

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  • Fay SlimmFay Slimm (7/5/2009 2:20:00 AM)

    Yes the moon can appear thus to the lonely or sad, and gives strange comfort at needed times..... good short write.... a 10 from Fay.....

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  • Dominique Zurbano (7/5/2009 1:17:00 AM)

    It's short but great. It has a deep meaning..

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  • *~*happily desturbed*~* ? (7/5/2009 12:25:00 AM)

    i like it short, but great.

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  • Carl Harris (7/5/2009 12:06:00 AM)

    Although this poem is all too brief, it is a very beautifully expressed and written poem, Lady Grace. It is certainly one of the very best short poems I have read in a good while! Carl.

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  • tom mc quade (7/5/2009 12:01:00 AM)

    i felt this poem rather than read it..cant help reading this poem without its image appearing in ones mind as described...im not resitant to feeling sadness if its done this way so beautifully.. :) tom

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  • Christina Phan (7/4/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    yea i can see
    gd little short one
    kept it up

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  • Carol Gall (7/4/2009 9:28:00 PM)

    with your words i can see the moon

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (7/4/2009 8:18:00 PM)

    Within the reflection of the moons tears....the night now cries amongst us......wonderful image

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  • Surya . (7/4/2009 8:08:00 PM)

    gives me a real feeling of sadness. wonderful lines and beautiful in conceprtion.
    voted10
    surya

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