Sadness Poem by lady grace

Sadness

Rating: 5.0


look at the stars
so dim in the sky....

have you seen the moon?
it's a picture of a lonely face...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Harris 05 July 2009

Although this poem is all too brief, it is a very beautifully expressed and written poem, Lady Grace. It is certainly one of the very best short poems I have read in a good while! Carl.

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i like it short, but great.

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Dominique Zurbano 05 July 2009

It's short but great. It has a deep meaning..

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Fay Slimm 05 July 2009

Yes the moon can appear thus to the lonely or sad, and gives strange comfort at needed times..... good short write.... a 10 from Fay.....

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Raj Arumugam 05 July 2009

beautiful imagery presented with a specific emotion

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S Phant0m 11 October 2009

Love this. thank you for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 August 2009

look at the stars so dim in the sky....moon is alone but gioves you so much coolness in return.. it is symbolic gesture on her part.. but the poem is so lovely wuth good rhythm and message....10

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Raj Nandy 15 July 2009

THE MOON IS INDEED A LONELY FACE! BUT ON A FULL MOON NIGHT IT BECOMES A LOVELY, BEAUTIFUL FACE! Various people view the moon in different ways! In a place without electricity, the moon provides its light! For the lovers and madman it has its own charm! But for the hungry and destitude of this world it is a vision of a rolled out bread! I have written a poem on the same! 10! - Raj Nandy

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rago rago 07 July 2009

sometimes sadness take our breath out to think it over again and again.......I love the write it is absolutely a good picture of write.........

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Carol-Anne Spalding 07 July 2009

My Goddess, this is an absolute gem of a poem....one I can especially relate to at the moment....well done, such the talent

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