Sadness - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin
Sadness - Tanka
The lonely sky weeps
Joins me in sorrow and pain
Defeats my loud cry
By the rage of its thunder
And the sharpness of lightning.
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2) This Tanka is of such beauty and softness, it hits me right in my heart and tears are rolling, this IS poetry I am very fond of
Thunder and lightning can be the rage of the sky upporting us against what makes us sad.
We feel the scene. The sadness too. Perfectly done. A poem with great sentimental impact and so deeply felt too. Bravo!
Rose Marie, you have so many exceptionally good poems. And this is in the top echelon!
A beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. A masterful creation, very powerfully and movingly brought forth. Thanks for sharing your wonderful contributions to the Poemhunter family. Remain enriched.
Dearest friend Rose, This poems ranks among the best of your poems. My favourite with top score
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/1/2024 3:54:31 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Fater having read this touching poem, I remember your lovely beautiful poem in the past about weeping outside while the wind was wild, so no one could hear the loud weeping. Or may I am wrong, but I thought that I still know that poem, not this, but nature is the great subject in it.
I apologize, this first word must be AFTER, that's my dyslexia in typing the words.
.....and the second word-mistake, near the end........Or maybe, it must be maybe, not only may, thank you for your attention.