Sea-Woman Awake On A Sleeping Shore Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

Sea-Woman Awake On A Sleeping Shore

Rating: 4.9

Her eyes
Are deeper than eyes
Her dreams
Are deeper than dreams
Her thoughts
Are deeper than thoughts
Her words
Are deeper than words
Her poems
Are deeper than poems.

(1990, Translated by Samina Amjad)

Akram Awadat 31 March 2009

wonderful poem Naseer well done thanks a lot

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Nicollette Wennersten 31 March 2009

i liked it but the other ones are better

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Greenwolfe 1962 31 March 2009

Obviously a writing of deep admiration of a special woman. Whether real or not, it does not matter. The essence of the piece is the admiration. While I cannot declare the meanings of your poems to be clear. The quality of your structure and your approach to poetry is such that there is a beauty in each presentation and there are no wasted words. You are a writer of quality. GW62

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James Enoch 01 April 2009

The title is lovely, I am jealous I didn't create it :)

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Jessica Kissner 01 April 2009

A very lovely poem speaking of how wonderful someone is wether its inadamite or alive. (Of couse in my religion everything is alive)

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Onelia Avelar 08 February 2010

I was wondering where did you vanish :) - sunk into the sea-woman's eyes and poems and the wind still repeats your name Naseer Naseer :) . Very romantic piece...

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Sonya Florentino 30 August 2009

ah! she is deeper than the ocean.....!

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a nother read..beautifulllllllllllllllllll

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deep thoughts about the beauty in her...10++++

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Mamta Agarwal 10 April 2009

Vision is the art of seeing the invisible, it takes love, insight and reverence to connect to someone at such a deep level. simple in expression, but very deep in thought. Actually I WILL LOVE TO READ THE ORIGINAL IN URDU. What an enchanting title, like a fairt tale. it makes me feel as if I didn't get the essence of it. Mamta

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