Life one day turned cross with me;
Knew not what went wrong where I lied
My faulty words? Indiscreet deeds?
Things no rosy;
To find out why
I pondered over each x and y
Spent many a day thus thinking why
Days came and left, returned yawning
My search still on; years passing by…
23 08 08
It's human nature to always want to know the answers to the unexplained in our life journeys when our paths lead us the wrong way...very thought provoking Kesav....-Cathy
There is nothing more realistic than the passing of time, if only there we could be assured that the passing of time would bring ease...a 10
Dead moments come alive just as live moments do not stay forever. This is the karma of life and living. It is natural that with the ability of thought, we go back in time to analyze our actions and words and dwell over what went wrong. We post mortem incidents which have faded well into nothingness and try to find clues to what surprises us most and what could have been...........a beautiful poem and very much to my liking..............arya
I pondered over each x and y Spent many a day thus thinking why Rachel Ann Butler
Life is full of uncertainties as we sail across the ocean of intricacy...but as we go on, we came to understand a lot if not all, and that's what we call maturity. Brilliant as ever, my dear friend! :)
looks like iam in the same boat as you...very well written
why O why! i relate this poem to me cause it rsembles my feelings...it surely is a great write with depths hidden in those few beautiful lines and this poem ges in my fav. too thank you for sharing this wonderful work kesav...10+++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Kesav, if we have learned from our mistakes, why look back, why not just be.....NOW. Brilliant write 10. Bob