We drank
From magical fountains
In childhood parks,
We smiled
On the merry-go-round
And heard
The illuminating chorus
From jubilant birds.
We spent
A dream-like day together
Holding hands in the sunlight;
And when evening arrived,
We kissed and gazed
Into mystical constellations
Deciphering secret codes
To eternal love.
A snapshot of a a wonderful day captured in a poem. Excellent. Regards, Sandra Fowler
This one is magical Uriah, a lovely scene depicted with such warmth and love. Loved it immensely. Love Ernestine XXX
A dream-like day together. Sounds utterly perfect and there's nothing I'd like better. j.
A secret is a woman's best friend, and a secret shared with only one...is the ultimate gift of faith and trust. To break a code of secrets together...is to discover life and spirit with one another deeply. Excellent poem. :) Thanks Angie
Look what you've done, Uriah. You've got all the women here all weepy and swooning. What a guy! I must admit, you paint a wonderful picture. I'd like to walk into it with one of these women.
... (sigh) it was like I was watching a love story with a box of tissues next to me, bound by the perfection of the day and the power of love. great work! HBH
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sounds like a perfect day.....and evening Uriah. I wonder if you look at anything without the beauty of it shining through. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary