See The Truth Poem by keith hendrickson

amazing wrote poem keep up the worko

This is a well writen peice I loved it. I understand what its like to to not trust anyone even my own family.I have been in foster care since i was three years old. Its hard to trust people that dont follow through and dont show they care. U will sooner later overcome that fear and start trusting people. u are amazing writer. Uve got potential and can do anything u set ur mind to. U have just got to believe in urself. Uve got to start out small and work urself to the top. ur truely krystal

this poem is just awesome.. i dont even know what to say! =) 10++

cute...well done keith

wow a work of art! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

all i gotta is DAM! ! ! ! you did a very good job this piece was more then poetic outstanding i should say...... i know exactly how you feels about trust but you see trust is something a lot of people don't take seriously unlike us.... love your poem updat me on new poetry whenever you can

ya have written very subtly and with frankness...deep emotional turmoil...winnie

I love your style :) :)

You did an awesome job in showing how disconnected one can feel from our body. I mean that how sometimes our body is present, but our mind is somewhere else. The only thing that I would reccomend is to try and finish it off. I mean, I love the direction you were headed in, you kept getting deeper and I loved it. But I sort of feel like you kinda left it hanging. I'm only trying to give you constructive criticism, please don't take it the wrong way. I love the way you write. Once again, love your style.

exactlly what i said before. you are truely amazing. i relate to every one of your pieces. specially this one! ! ! !