See The Truth Poem by keith hendrickson

a very thoughtful theme with a good flow to the verse

You can really feel the poem build up in its intensity and its yearning for answers. I also love the flow and wonderful imagery to bring to connect your audience.

this is beautiful! I love the way it all just flows together!

Very well written, I love the climax aspect to the piece.

Great job. we have a lot in common

all i gotta is DAM! ! ! ! you did a very good job this piece was more then poetic outstanding i should say...... i know exactly how you feels about trust but you see trust is something a lot of people don't take seriously unlike us.... love your poem updat me on new poetry whenever you can

ya have written very subtly and with frankness...deep emotional turmoil...winnie

I love your style :) :)

You did an awesome job in showing how disconnected one can feel from our body. I mean that how sometimes our body is present, but our mind is somewhere else. The only thing that I would reccomend is to try and finish it off. I mean, I love the direction you were headed in, you kept getting deeper and I loved it. But I sort of feel like you kinda left it hanging. I'm only trying to give you constructive criticism, please don't take it the wrong way. I love the way you write. Once again, love your style.

exactlly what i said before. you are truely amazing. i relate to every one of your pieces. specially this one! ! ! !