Self-Reflection, Life Is Beautiful Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Self-Reflection, Life Is Beautiful

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how could to force
when all prevent
how could to berate
if don't understand yourself

don't demand understanding
if don't want to compromise
don't assume adult
when egos take the rules

there comes a time to relent
to see the beautiful ending
sometimes, must be waiting
to be sure, it's not a dream

honestly, life is beautiful
if able to accepting
it should be a happily life
if can understand the world


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Thiagarajan 18 February 2013

Yes. Life is beautiful - sometimes so beautiful- waiting to be sure it is not the dream! ! Nice lines! ! Good! !

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 19 February 2013

an expression in an unique way deserving appreciation

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Savita Tyagi 31 March 2013

Beautiful write of a mature thought. Enjoyed reading it.

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Rajendran Muthiah 23 February 2013

Life is beautiful when you accept that adversity is a part of life and it is happy, when you understand the world.

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Kelvin Owusu 20 February 2013

this is a good piece almost like my old style of writing, nicely done

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Patricia Grantham 20 February 2013

Nice poem, life is indeed beautiful. Appreciate the write

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Mark Dillon 19 February 2013

Nicely written, sometimes we get so caught up in the race that we don't slow down enough to appreciate what is already there.

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