M. Asim Nehal

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Senryu - 110 We Are Together - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Your mood swing is a
perfect measurement of time
rotates together

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life, life, love and friendship

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 110 We Are Together by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/14/2016 3:13:00 PM)

    With the mood of true love. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (1/14/2016 9:33:00 AM)

    Mood swing measuring cyclic time. An interesting senryu (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2016 6:21:00 AM)

    Very wonderfu.................................ll (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (1/14/2016 1:49:00 AM)

    Swinging mood is the perfect measurement. Very wonderful to remain in togetherness. Wise sharing done definitely.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 14, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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