Senryu.1. Stagnation Poem by Valsa George

Senryu.1. Stagnation

Rating: 5.0


When everyone moves
I am stuck here at the fork
Confused where to go

Wednesday, October 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madathil Rajendran Nair 08 October 2015

Just pray and choose one hand of the fork and proceed as Robert Frost would have done.

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Kelly Kurt 08 October 2015

I hope this is only art and not a real crisis. Peace

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Loke Kok Yee 08 October 2015

in your case whichever way will be the right one! .-10

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Akhtar Jawad 08 October 2015

Yes, sometimes it happens with all, a nice expression.

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2015

And at times it does happens to everyone. Well expressed.

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Luo Zhihai 26 August 2020

When everyone moves I am stuck here at the fork Confused where to go You are so persistent!

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Kesav Easwaran 20 March 2020

The middle line is tastefully poetic. Defines stagnation very well 10+

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Prabir Gayen 01 August 2019

When everyone moves I am stuck here at the fork Confused where to go...fine

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Bri Edwards 08 September 2018

i may have stuck myself with my fork while eating too quickly! but I NEVER get confused! ! ! now, where was i? ? ? bri :) bri ;)

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 October 2015

Verily, your success lies in stucks as you wisely find out the right way And who have gone forward find themselves on the wrong track at the terminal.......10

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