Senryu 8 Poem by Savita Tyagi

Senryu 8

Rating: 5.0


Loved ones pushed aside
individual living
Lonely empathy.

Saturday, June 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 11 June 2016

Very true. Nicely written.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 June 2016

Wow what a nice senryu, upon life issues. Great to read n tink. Thumbs up. And thanx.

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Savita Tyagi 08 June 2016

Thank you Zaynub Kamoonpuri for your encouraging comment.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 June 2016

The state one reaches late in life is beautifully stated in three lines.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 June 2016

Very interesting, amazing and humorous poem is shared on really. Lonely empathy determines the way to expression. Amazing.10

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Bri Edwards 04 June 2016

If that were all there was to life, I would HAVE to end it. Luckily, there is also ice cream and pizza! ! ! :) bri

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Savita Tyagi 04 June 2016

And don't forget the green tea! Thank you so much.

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