M. Asim Nehal

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Senryu - 83 Sweet Home - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Birds are taking leaves
One by one to build the nest
Sweet home is ready

Topic(s) of this poem: home, life

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu - 83 Sweet Home by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/3/2016 4:44:00 AM)

    Home sweet home! ! ! Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/21/2015 10:45:00 AM)

    Sweet home made with this senryu, Wonderful Asimji. (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2015 1:11:00 AM)

    takes time but eventually they have a nest
    thanks Asim-10
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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/20/2015 7:59:00 PM)

    A beautiful Haiku................................ (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/20/2015 2:32:00 PM)

    Sweet home is always sweet. Birds search for their sweet home instantly and take life in cheerful moment. Very amazing sharing done really...10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/20/2015 9:53:00 AM)

    The haiku in its truest form. Wonderful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 20, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016

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