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Senryu - 83 Sweet Home

Rating: 5.0

Birds are taking leaves
One by one to build the nest
Sweet home is ready

Friday, November 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: home,life
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 20 November 2015

The haiku in its truest form. Wonderful

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 May 2016

Home sweet home! ! ! Nice work.

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T Rajan Evol 21 November 2015

Sweet home made with this senryu, Wonderful Asimji.

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Loke Kok Yee 21 November 2015

takes time but eventually they have a nest thanks Asim-10

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Akhtar Jawad 20 November 2015

A beautiful Haiku................................

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2015

Sweet home is always sweet. Birds search for their sweet home instantly and take life in cheerful moment. Very amazing sharing done really...10

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