Senryu- A Love Relation Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu- A Love Relation

Rating: 5.0


silence between us
two inseparable lives
parallel in love

Senryu- A Love Relation
Thursday, December 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2020

Wonderful poetic expression with a tinge of philosophical insight. Beautifully penned my friend.5 stars

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 31 December 2020

A silence in love means everything.

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Kostas Lagos 31 December 2020

A five star senryu!

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Rajnish Manga 31 December 2020

Love is blessed with the fourth dimension which carries it to the eternal end.

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Jagdish Singh Ramana 31 December 2020

Ishq bezuban hota hai. A beautiful poetic expression.

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Anjandev Roy 08 January 2021

Beautiful, as usual....

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Zuzu Mutairi 04 January 2021

Brilliant poem. Nicely conceived

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Varsha M 04 January 2021

Silence speaks a lot

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George Krokos 01 January 2021

This Senryu is great but somehow I think that the word - lines - on the second line should be given as 'lives' which would be more specific and to the point. What do you think? Regards to you and Happy New Year.

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Pallab Chaudhury 01 January 2021

Wishing you a happy and prosperous new year 2021...

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