silence between us
two inseparable lives
parallel in love
Love is blessed with the fourth dimension which carries it to the eternal end.
Ishq bezuban hota hai. A beautiful poetic expression.
This Senryu is great but somehow I think that the word - lines - on the second line should be given as 'lives' which would be more specific and to the point. What do you think? Regards to you and Happy New Year.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful poetic expression with a tinge of philosophical insight. Beautifully penned my friend.5 stars