Senryu: Apples Poem by David Wood

Senryu: Apples

Rating: 5.0

You get to the tree
And find the apple's been picked
Story of my life….

Monday, June 5, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: apple,life
S H 06 June 2023

Like honey bees. At service - always. Amusing poem. All Stars

0 0 Reply
M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Awesome Senryu. Good that the tree is still there. I want this tree to remain no matter apples are there or not.5*****

0 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 June 2023

Mine Too David Bravo! ! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
Anjandev Roy 06 June 2023

This is simply excellent.....thank u, dear friend.....

0 0 Reply
D.N. Rebb 06 June 2023

This is a perfect poem. I thought it is a haiku, now I need to look up senryu. Thanks for the lesson

0 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 10 June 2023

Senryu to ponder upon. TOP Marks, David.

0 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 10 June 2023

The apple you had in thought to eat and it had been robbed away by unknown beings, your life stops when the one apple you had in mind was picked away. Greatest disappointment follows. Brilliant Senryu, David!

0 0 Reply
Nosheen Irfan 08 June 2023

Sheer brilliance! I can absolutely relate. What a masterpiece! Full marks!

0 0 Reply

Fantastic. The subtle humour in the poem, the poet directs at himself. Beautiful.5*

0 0 Reply
Rajan T Renganathan 07 June 2023

Like Blue bull this poem is wonderful. Short and straight.5 Str.

0 0 Reply
Error Success