Senryu: Apples Poem by David Wood

Wow! ! This is super senryu. Thanks.

Brilliant David : ) Loved it x

This is a perfect poem. I thought it is a haiku, now I need to look up senryu. Thanks for the lesson

This is simply excellent.....thank u, dear friend.....

Mine Too David Bravo! ! ! ! !

Senryu to ponder upon. TOP Marks, David.

The apple you had in thought to eat and it had been robbed away by unknown beings, your life stops when the one apple you had in mind was picked away. Greatest disappointment follows. Brilliant Senryu, David!

Sheer brilliance! I can absolutely relate. What a masterpiece! Full marks!

Fantastic. The subtle humour in the poem, the poet directs at himself. Beautiful.5*

Like Blue bull this poem is wonderful. Short and straight.5 Str.