Her fair face turned pink
As the flush of early dawn
At his stealing glance
A simple observation of life turned into a Senryu.. Beautiful one Valsa ma'am..
At his stealing glance! Like one seen in the bush. Nice piece of work.
A wonderful little poem dear madam! Thanks for sharing! (Poetess Magadha)
A beautiful senryu wisely executed in three lines having nice theme. Thanks for sharing.10
A fabulous Senryu! The changing effect of 'Her fair face' is magnificently coordinated with 'his stealing glance'....action vs reaction.....I like the gravity of poetic imagination! Thanks dear madam for sharing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
with delight and joy I hope! thanks Valsa