Senryu- Blush Poem by Valsa George

Senryu- Blush

Rating: 5.0


Her fair face turned pink
As the flush of early dawn
At his stealing glance

Sunday, March 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 20 March 2016

with delight and joy I hope! thanks Valsa

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Kelly Kurt 20 March 2016

Such a human reaction. Beautiful

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Nosheen Irfan 21 March 2016

Another amazing senryu. The imagery is heart-warming.

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Souren Mondal 21 March 2016

A simple observation of life turned into a Senryu.. Beautiful one Valsa ma'am..

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 July 2016

At his stealing glance! Like one seen in the bush. Nice piece of work.

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Magadha Rani 15 March 2020

A wonderful little poem dear madam! Thanks for sharing! (Poetess Magadha)

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bri edwards 08 September 2018

it wasn't JUST her face! to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2018

A beautiful senryu wisely executed in three lines having nice theme. Thanks for sharing.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 January 2018

A fabulous Senryu! The changing effect of 'Her fair face' is magnificently coordinated with 'his stealing glance'....action vs reaction.....I like the gravity of poetic imagination! Thanks dear madam for sharing!

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Loke Kok Yee 13 May 2017

This is a masterpiece, truly poetic. thanks Valsa

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