Senryu- Concert Poem by Valsa George

Senryu- Concert

Rating: 5.0


I hear from so near
War's thundering symphony
Heart chords strum in fear

Friday, February 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simone Inez Harriman 12 February 2016

Can hear the fear in your senryu Valsa. Well penned...10

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 12 February 2016

The moment of fear... nicely captured.

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Kelly Kurt 12 February 2016

The tell tale heart. Poignant Senryu

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Abhilasha Bhatt 12 February 2016

War...a 3 letter word which is the synonym of destruction...nice sharing...thank you :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 July 2019

War's thundering symphony creates fear. We do not like war, we need peace. A beautiful poem in concise is shared amazingly. TFS,

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Akhtar Jawad 05 August 2016

God save the people from the destruction of a war, give us guidance to live in peace. Amen!

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Valsa George 05 August 2016

Amen....!

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2016

The the muse of dead bodies around. Thanks for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 14 February 2016

A synchronised concert............10+++

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 February 2016

Violence of the vibrating chords represents the war. Striking presentation of the war.

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