Senryu ~ In Pairs Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ In Pairs

Rating: 5.0


silence of your love
will resonate in valley
till eternity....

from the dusk to dawn
fragrance of your existence
carried by moonbeam

Tuesday, February 28, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 28 February 2023

I liked them, they are twin entwined nicely.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 February 2023

Brilliant Senryu in pairs. Beautifully crafted and well executed with powerful images.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 February 2023

A great depiction of the power and wonders of love. To my favorites.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 February 2023

I love them both, but enjoyed the second one especially

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Richard Wlodarski 02 March 2023

The power of love so exquisitely crafted through wondrous poetry!

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Nosheen Irfan 01 March 2023

Just awesome! Spontaneous words pouring from the depths of the heart.

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Loved this enticing verse. Top score

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Sandra Feldman 01 March 2023

Exquisite images that give a very special meaning to this exceptional, and enveloping delight!

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Anjandev Roy 28 February 2023

Carried by moonbeam.....significant....

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