deeper than the sea
silent darkness of this earth
my heart floats on waves
A poem of great depth in just minimal lines that capture the wonders of love.
How love nurtures in silent darkness of this earth, when moon shines and the waves touches the shores of heart. Lovely poem, MAN,5 STars
Five stars are not enough. I need a whole constellation to rate this poem
Delightful and insightful Senryu, love nurture all the world and his waves are so calming to the mind and soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I am amused by these three lines. To reach the depth of a sea in love is just what we all try to achieve. Seldom we find floating on waves and feeling silent and darkness both.