Senryu ~ Love ♡ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ Love ♡

Rating: 5.0


deeper than the sea
silent darkness of this earth
my heart floats on waves

Tuesday, July 6, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ricky Magnathen 06 July 2021

I am amused by these three lines. To reach the depth of a sea in love is just what we all try to achieve. Seldom we find floating on waves and feeling silent and darkness both.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2021

A poem of great depth in just minimal lines that capture the wonders of love.

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How love nurtures in silent darkness of this earth, when moon shines and the waves touches the shores of heart. Lovely poem, MAN,5 STars

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S H 06 July 2021

Straight to the point of love. On target.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 06 July 2021

Filled with love. Lovely poem Asim.

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Poetic Sky 07 July 2021

A floating heart. Truth of life.

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Darren Jkoeryo 07 July 2021

DJ like the terse verse. This one is fabulous.

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Kostas Lagos 07 July 2021

Five stars are not enough. I need a whole constellation to rate this poem

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Lasaad Tayeb 06 July 2021

Delightful and insightful Senryu, love nurture all the world and his waves are so calming to the mind and soul

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Juhaina Tumlu 06 July 2021

This is awesome 👌senryu.

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