Senryu Series - 71 (To Make You Happy) Poem by Dr. M. Asim Nehal

Senryu Series - 71 (To Make You Happy)

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Your salty tears have
drowned me in deep sea of thoughts
mind suffocating.

Life is struggling hard
to make you happy again
bring back starry shine

Loneliness, comfort.
to bring again those lost dreams
with a smiley hope.

For your happiness
I'll turn earth- sky upside down
On painting canvas.

Friday, November 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,happy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 06 November 2015

there is a mighty lucky gal out there thanks Asim-10+++

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Paul Warren 06 November 2015

I like the intensity of your feelings - nice one

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Konab Ghumman 13 March 2019

Nice poetry beautiful words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

Caregiving! Nice work.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2015

Life is struggling but salty tear fills in emotion in this for happiness one individual promises to turn the world is interesting with imagery. Nice sharing...10

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Jaishree Nair 06 November 2015

Love is turning the earth and sky upside down to bring happiness to the loved one.A nice drop. Thanks

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Sanjukta Nag 06 November 2015

It's better not to say anything after those sublime lines. just clicking the 10

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