Senryu Series - 77 Empty Nest Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Senryu Series - 77 Empty Nest
container of life
stitched with needle of love
seems abandoned.
and birds flew away,
after first successful flight,
tree expecting upright.
tree is very hopeful
with patience and faith on top
yet, the light is fading.
thought flew forever
yet the hope for seeing them one day
appeared like dream.
yet fate forced them
to take shelter for a night,
destined to meet.
Yes you are very true in drafting. Tree is very hopeful With patience and faith on top....Amazing poem shared definitely. Wise sharing.10
Container of life Stitched with needle of love Seems abandoned. Beautiful haiku series strung together with similar beads of thought and turned into a beautiful necklace! A 10
This is like a wholesome feast for the lovers of Haiku. This lovely series is based on promise and optimism starting with the first flight of a young bird. Thanks, Md. Asim ji.
brds coming back to their abandoned nest what a lovely read tanks Asi-10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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WONDERFUL CHAIN OF HAIKUS BOUND TOGETHER BY CONTINUITY OF THEME. Nice write. Enjoyed reading, . Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Thank u so much Mr. Ratnakarji.