Senryu - Years Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Years

Rating: ★5.0


this ship never sailed
the anchor never lifted
and waves did the job

tears roll from my eyes
i collect broken pieces
as year bids goodbye

M. Asim Nehal
Monday, December 27, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: memories,prison
poem poems broken Goodbye
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Aarzoo Mehek 27 December 2021

Let go as the year ends. Don't give a space in your life to carry forward the pain. Very touchy poem.

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Shreya Hacks 27 December 2021

A touch poem stating the affairs of Covid-19 continued in 2020 and 2021 hope things will change.

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Poetic Sky 27 December 2021

Years slipping like sand from the hands.

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Sandra Feldman 29 December 2021

Don't we all, Don't we all! ... Excellent and long reaching marvel! Full marks.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 27 December 2021

Crafty year end poem.

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Maria Mitea 27 December 2021

So well done, Asim! Great One!

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David Wood 27 December 2021

Well said, you've summed everything perfectly.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 December 2021

Bravo! Happy Blessed New Year

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