! ! ! Serotinin Malfunction! ! ! ! ! Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! ! ! Serotinin Malfunction! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.9


He proclaims he is a great poet
in his own unpleasant kingdom
praise him he scare you-
criticize him he scare you-
request him he chase you-
caution, a poet writes
only for him and his
unkind kingdom united
Serotonin malfunction

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 23 July 2008

nerves when guided by neurotransmitters at time withb syndromes verses still flows through the plexus of neurons may be syncopated what he thinks and what he does all when controlled by the synapse yet he does wrong as when slogged by dysfunction of serotonin..............excellent view of hormones acting upon the brains, well -penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Indira Babbellapati 24 July 2008

rema...aren't all of us playfields for hormones...they manifest in different ways in different cultures...

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Onelia Avelar 06 August 2008

I start to wonder who is this poet, deserving so much poems by you lately :) . Who is this mystic guy? I cannot guess, but he obviosly provokes some very passionate bitter ironical pieces.

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C T Heart 26 July 2008

A heartless poet? Claimed he is the king, the LION in the jungle, the ruler of his own kingdom...he only sets the Thames on fire, doesn't know he only burns a flat tire........

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Ramesh T A 25 July 2008

Why should we bother about such guys? Choice is ours! Take or leave it! If message is interesting it is well and good for all.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 24 July 2008

A good sense of human qualitties added with poetic diction to make it a nice reading

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 July 2008

Well, well, well! ! ! This is really wonderful. As sharp as a stilletto. If time permits please read my

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