As darkness thickens
into a mass of impenetrable silence
and moon fades from sight
of budding dreams
Should I make-believe
I have the choice
to grasp the dawn
Shall I rise
from the night
where darkness thunders loud
and the waves come
crashing down on the fallen
too hard
Shall I rise
to catch my falling self
in mid-air.
A profound melancholy poem, dear Ma'am Nosheen..........10+++++++++++
Shall I rise from the night where darkness thunders loud and the waves come crashing down........./// beautiful poetic expression
I have the choice! ! ! With the voice of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A brilliant poem well written embellished with superb imagery and beautiful and strong verses putting the reader into the shoes of the author, feel what she feels and be with her thoughts. Another write that stirs the senses
Sometimes when we are enveloped by sadness and we are at our lowest lows, we usually ask this powerful question, Shall I Rise? " A powerful, wonderful and thought provoking poem that presents the intriguing nature of human beings. That we are endowed with capabilities to assess the situation and put into action whatever our mind set us to do.
darkness thunders loud and the waves come crashing down on the fallen too hard Shall I rise to catch my falling self in mid-air......outstanding conceptualization with deeep melancholy. Brilliant poem with touching expression is incisively executed. A10.
Thank you so much dear Susan for your kind comments. Humbled and honored.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a wonderful poem, dear Nosheen.