She Walked Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

She Walked

Rating: 4.1


She walked in the midnight hours
With some fond memories.
Her road ahead was unknown
As changes had begun!
Life took a sharp unforeseen turn
As intimacy crumbled,
And sensuous rain came to a standstill.
The heart shuffled its colours
From dazzling light to pitch darkness!
She took her stride...
With a dry flower in hand
From the native graveyard,
Longing furthermore
With her deepest will
For gaining strength
To step into a new world,
Thus pursuing the blurred mirage
Of lost paradise...

Copyright © 2013 Indranil Bhaduri

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Divya Gupta 17 August 2013

nyc 1....bt a sad poem..it flows well.... :)

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Valsa George 16 August 2013

Not everything is lost! Hope lingers! The gates of paradise can open anytime! Though the poem started on a melancholic tone, the positive note at the close is relieving! Greatly enjoyed! !

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 14 August 2013

Very nice poem sad but nice tone. Liked the flow and feel while reading. Well done.

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Yasmin Khan 14 August 2013

A sad story is vividly narrated in beautiful images enhancing the theme of lost love and grief.

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Patricia Grantham 14 August 2013

Paradise was lost but then it was regained. Sometimes we find ourselves plunged in the valley of despair. Sooner or later we see the light at the end of the tunnel and dig ourselves out. Please read my poem Valley of Despair. Loved this one.

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Dinesan Madathil 05 September 2013

She should have walked with cautious steps and the distance covered already is quite long! The last phase may be with little suffering we hope. What is great about this poem is Indrani Bhaduri`s precise and meticulous rendering of the thoughts into a short and meaningful write of the kind. The diction has been apt and meaningful.

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Heather Wilkins 26 August 2013

we must all move on into tomorrow a great strong write

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 23 August 2013

A poem of strength, this is life, that change has to take place in order for us to grow, A remarkable poem indeed.

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Beach Girl 19 August 2013

I gave this a 10. Excellent poem of the strength it takes to step into a 'new world' after the passing of a mate. Love it!

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Survi Sharma 18 August 2013

nice poem i liked every word knitted here

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