A thousand reasons
to stay in the relationship.
A thousand reasons
to quit the relationship...
Sky clear sometimes, the sky clouded.
Excellent excellent excellent choice of a metaphor. The smooth glide from line to line helped give it snap like the tip of a whip would give and the closing line could not have been better. Deceptively brief yet the lines were carrying an awesome weight. Top marks and on a fav list
A Beautiful short poem about " Relationship" एक छोटा सा शेर अर्ज़ करना चाहता हूँ जुदाइयाँ तो मुक़द्दर हैं फिर भी जान-ए-सफ़र, कुछ और दूर ज़रा साथ चल के देखते हैं।। क्यूँ तन्हाईयों मे छोड़ कर रुसवा हो गए, कुछ और दूर ज़रा साथ चलते तो मज़ा आ जाता।। 100%%+
Sky clear sometimes, the sky clouded.......fine....thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.
Under the umbrella of the sky! ! ! ! Relationships. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Relationship that values are always respected rest all forget as dust over shoes They were never important nor will they value you.