Short Poem - On Relationship Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Short Poem - On Relationship

Rating: 4.8


A thousand reasons
to stay in the relationship.
A thousand reasons
to quit the relationship...
Sky clear sometimes, the sky clouded.

Sunday, October 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 11 October 2020

Relationship that values are always respected rest all forget as dust over shoes They were never important nor will they value you.

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S H 11 October 2020

Reasons are several yet one should choose wisely

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Michael Jack 11 October 2020

They are mirror of self. Keep checking.

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Shreya Hacks 12 October 2020

Reasons needs to be assessed.

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Poetic Sky 12 October 2020

Yes turbulence is part and parcel of this life

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Susan Williams 12 October 2020

Excellent excellent excellent choice of a metaphor. The smooth glide from line to line helped give it snap like the tip of a whip would give and the closing line could not have been better. Deceptively brief yet the lines were carrying an awesome weight. Top marks and on a fav list

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Sharad Bhatia 12 October 2020

A Beautiful short poem about " Relationship" एक छोटा सा शेर अर्ज़ करना चाहता हूँ जुदाइयाँ तो मुक़द्दर हैं फिर भी जान-ए-सफ़र, कुछ और दूर ज़रा साथ चल के देखते हैं।। क्यूँ तन्हाईयों मे छोड़ कर रुसवा हो गए, कुछ और दूर ज़रा साथ चलते तो मज़ा आ जाता।। 100%%+

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Anjandev Roy 12 October 2020

Sky clear sometimes, the sky clouded.......fine....thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 October 2020

Under the umbrella of the sky! ! ! ! Relationships. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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