? ? ? Should The Pleading Be Heard? ? ? Poem by Aastha Uppal

? ? ? Should The Pleading Be Heard? ? ?

Rating: 2.8


No one can define pain
i only wish happiness and sorrows we could strain
The tough times will pass, they say
But what if there's no hope no bright ray.


There's no spring no autumn
All i know is my heart's rotten
Tired of being dependent, being a lump
Surviving on nothing but a pump


i know not how many years have passed
Lying on this bed motionless like a carcass
Speechless, motionless no way can i express
My emotions are all dumped in my head
Believe me it's worse than being dead


i plead 'kill me' they call it a crime
wait everything will heal with time
They say everything can be cured
But i know never can you mend a dead soul
so i'll not be lured


EUTHANASIA they say is what i am asking for
Name it whatever you want i care not
They say its illegal taking a human's life
Are you kidding, i know not what is life


Betrayed by your love, you want to be killed
Failed in life, you want to be killed
Grieved, you want to be killed
Heart-broken, you want to be killed
Now tell me am i asking for a lot
i beg before you to relieve me please, don't let me rot


i beg before you to take my life
i plead before you for a new life
Shouldn't my pleading be heard, am i asking for a lot
Just do me a favour -kill me, don't let me rot.



DEDICATED TO THE ONES WHO ARE ASKING FOR EUTHANASIA BUT ARE BEING DENIED.

-aAstha

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Trivedi 15 July 2010

Words are short to say that you have written this one so wonderfully...... Just touched my heart........ Great job...10+++

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mohsin amin khan 21 April 2010

there is no spring no atumn then describing heart as rotten a nice message you have sketched from your inner feelings

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Afzal Shauq 28 February 2010

No one can define pain i only wish happiness and sorrows we could strain The tough times will pass, they say But what if there's no hope no bright ray agreed with your say.. really a realistic approach..10/10

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Dulakshi Wakista 22 February 2010

You've expressed your thoughts so nicely.well expressed.Good piece of work.

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Kobik William 06 February 2010

I like the way you are not scared of saying what you think despite the fact that many will not stand by what you are saying.That was well penned.

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Punit Jain 19 January 2012

nice one again......

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The Lost Mind 17 January 2012

A really good poem... Shows that Ur concerned about the people living in such agony...

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Deep Mukherjee 16 January 2012

nice expressions of thoughts........

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Aranthabailu Ummar 05 October 2011

A weep without sound, but lure for self death will not justified god is the begining he is the last

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Kazi Ahmed 27 September 2011

Good write up.Well conceived, Pain remains undefined...yet there are plenty of dictionary 'explanation'.10/10.

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