Silences....
Is my memory still uptodate today?
Amidst the great silence
our silent breaths
and full of happiness
On moonlit paths of our sighs
as we drove down town,
I remember
our long conversations
those were no celebrations
full of adorations
it was just like a celebration though
My sincere thoughts are going now to you
If I could be there again
Just for a couple of minutes
My heart leaps up again,
nothing would be in vain
This is no dirge nor devotion, my dear,
but true admiration....
Many of us could relate to this marvelous poem. Very sweet and tender....feelings that make us human. Liked the opening lines of this write. Simply beautiful. Onto my Poem List.
A very touching and heartfelt write. Our great and sweet memories of someone close to our heart will close the gap between us....make us closer but still our heart yearns to be there closer to our loved ones.
Memory takes us where we want to go. A minute or two is enough, then on to something we had forgotten.
Sincere thoughts motivate life with greatness and life is encouraged with beauty of perception. On moon light our path is visible and we feel God's creation. Heart leaps again. An excellent poem with beautiful expression is presented. Thank you very much for sharing this...10
A lovely floating sensation of well being impregnates totally and marvelously this lovely poem of remembrance and deep feelings. It grips us softly till the end but still then, leaves its engaging perfume of rose petals and admiration. Unforgettable To my treasure chest..
A passionate composition written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, madam.