Simple Verse. No.9. Love At First Sight Poem by Valsa George

Simple Verse. No.9. Love At First Sight

Rating: 5.0


A spark lit through presence
Fanned through glance
Brightened through absence
Blazed through romance
Steadied through alliance
Tested through defiance
Weakened through silence
Oft extinguished through clash

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 11 February 2014

touch of a soul mate....

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 11 February 2014

all its hues and shades, very well brought out.

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Savita Tyagi 11 February 2014

Beautiful! A walk through the mysterious world of love.

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 February 2014

Wow... A wonderful poem with beautiful rhymes. Beautiful way you have described love at first sight with few lines.. Enjoyed reading it.

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Valerie Dohren 11 February 2014

Short, succinct, well said. Love at first sight doesn't always last.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 March 2020

A beautiful description of first love. The first real taste of pure unfettered desire. And love that always holds us spellbound. An insightful poem wonderfully written with great rhyme.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2018

'Love At First Sight' is brilliantly penned. So touching and impressive. Beautiful poem.10

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Dinesan Madathil 16 February 2014

Love at first sight is after all either blind or beyond reason If accepted, it is a folly of prudence And if and when rejected it is a bubble of despair... Love after many a sight has no tale to tell either.... If culminated in matrimony, it is a convention trespassed And if extended without that, it is a conviction imbibed. A simple verse for a high cause.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 February 2014

Extinguishing may also be caused by reticence. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 12 February 2014

Simply great love at first sight expressed so delicately..........Valsa............

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