Sleepless Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Sleepless

Rating: 5.0


When the world falls asleep
Many short dreams will reap
Forgetting about all its weep
It calms the beat in its sleep
At that time my poems leap

Words come from my deep
Its a pain of a heavy steep
Which no one likes to keep
Or even likes to have a peep
So words flown off to sweep

It made my writes to heap
That made me stop to creep
Slowly my pain too got seep
By sound of my words beep
It tells I am his special sheep

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 16 October 2009

Rhymes at the end of sentences makes the poem

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Rajaram Ramachandran 16 October 2009

The poem rhymes well.

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Surya . 16 October 2009

aonderful poem with a message.rhymes well too. voted10 surya

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Louis Rams 16 October 2009

if sleepless nights make you write, then let it be for we need your poetry. a ten

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Louis Rams 16 October 2009

if sleepless nights make you write, then let it be for we need your poetry. a ten

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Antonio Liao 20 October 2009

a reflective poem ripe...a special adoration...so sweet and inspiring lines... beneath your heart....thank you my dear and lovable friend....a 10 +++

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rago rago 19 October 2009

good write.......................

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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009

wonderful meditative poem, lovely rhymes............10+++++++

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Shashendra Amalshan 18 October 2009

Hey I specially loved your last two lines.. Kinda brought a smile to my face.. Not many writes rhyming poetry these days.. Yet it adds lot to the flow or the rhythm of the poem..Good.. cheers Shan

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Catrina Heart 18 October 2009

a wonderful poetry shared all rhymed from beginning to end........Thanks!

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