Snow Man Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Snow Man

Rating: 3.1


Shiver-shiver in the cold
Who is that standing out there bold
He can stand the snowing night
He looks clean and very white
He has a very funny smile
He looks like snow heaped in a pile
His smile is made up of stone
He has neither flesh, blood nor bone
His hands are made up of sticks
I wish they were made of bricks.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007

Do you get snow in india Risha...

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Dee Daffodil 05 January 2007

This was just what I needed, we've had an unusually warm winter so far in Canada, and I miss building snowmen with my kids! Good poem Hugs, Dee

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Raghavan Warrier 01 December 2006

'He looks like snow heaped in a pile His smile is made up of stone He has neither flesh, blood nor bone His hands are made up of sticks' These four lines sums up the image of snow man in its enitrety as if we are looking at a picture postcard. Excellent.

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Diane Violet 30 November 2006

I really like your snowman poem Risha, I to like to make snowmen. Love from, Diane

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Asma Bahrainwala 05 November 2006

a lovely poem, risha... Asma...

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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