Sonnet Ii-Truth's, Truth Revealed Poem by Yash Shinde

Good sonnet and again you did it...keep writing Yash_Soul

A powerful message, so well written, great write.!

If you are only 14 my friend, then you are off to a good start. I found this a very stimulating, uplifting read. Not quite enough feet in each line to make it a true sonnet form, should be 10 feet, but well done. Keep at it

Nice poem but this is not the final frontier. Truth wins at last. It needs a worthy warrior to win.

Good poem Yash. You make your point very well. 'Turning them lout' is an odd way of saying it - but effective nonetheless.

Three blind men went to an elephant, . One of them touched his ears, he commented the elephant is like a tray. Another one touched his leg, he commented it's like a pillar. The third one touched his tail, he commented it's like a snake. It is difficult to define truth, every one has his own point of view. Every one is right up to an extent and every one is wrong, too. A thing from different frame of references appears different. In this poem you appeared an angry young man and wrote a beautiful poem, but swords are not the solution. Donate your eyes for a life longer than that of you, so that a blind man is capable of watching the complete elephant.

@the theme: there's no denying that such a grim battlefield exists, and we see a sorry state of affairs too as you related here, but yes, truth always finds a way in the long run... @the sonnet: you have all the capabilities Yash, you could have followed the complete Shakespearean alternate rhyme scheme in the 2nd and the 3rd stanzas too...with a little effort! @punctuation: 3 dots do well but not more than 3, you can edit, even the 3 are not required here... quite meaningful poem!

You write amazing poems. Very touch and emotional. I really like this poem.

truth is bitter...the depth in your poems is really amazing for a 16-year-old...

We often believe that ultimately truth will triumph! But unfortunately truth is made blunt and lie cutting sharp in today's battlefield... As a feeling youngster, you are disappointed over this reversal of values.... A great write!