i cursed god for my fate,
i cursed myself for being always late.
i hated god for giving me tears,
i hated myself for living in fears.
i questioned god 'why such to me? '
i questioned myself 'am i not sturdy? '
my life was doomed in darkness,
without a glimpse of happiness.
as i grew up i came to know,
god is high and me so low.
whatever happened, all had a cause.
so i moved on without pause.
i was changed with life's turns,
as paper into ashes when it burns.
i travelled long, walked with the stars,
realised, life gives both smiles & scars.
Life becomes beautiful, when we learn to heal those scars with a smile. Keep penning, it repairs all your scars and bring back that smile.
The last two lines sum it up. An inspiring piece of poetry. I liked the other poets' comments too, all inspirational. whatever happened, all had a cause. so i moved on without pause. On, on! Move on baby!
whatever happened, all had a cause. so i moved on without pause. i was changed with life's turns, as paper into ashes when it burns. beautiful words full of iimagination...i danced with the stars and walked on the milky way to realise life has both smiles and scars. wonderful poem dear poetess. tony
Such a true piece.. I love it. Keep courage...10 +++... You may like to read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too or the last kiss with death ... I understand it deeply and it moved me.. We ourselves are wrong.. Naila
Very poignant and serious write. Profound feelings expressed in extremely poetic words.Touching.
nostalgic write awesome word selection and a great meaning inside
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nicely written and influencial true and natural poem liked a lot