Tangible as a wish that comes from a heart true;
spirited as a dream that lives to come through; definite as tomorrow's sun; subtle as friendly fun.
Pleasing as a childish smile staying for a while; ephemeral as a fleeting moment; lively as a flowing current;
the spark of her eye; to live to stay to roam
Till the cows come home.
nice similes: ''Tangible as a wish that comes from a heart true; spirited as a dream that lives to come through'' embedded in this wonderful poem......10
the sparks in her eyes are the light that lighten up the lonely sky the sparks of her love reflects in her eyes touches everybody's hearts, reaches one's dream..
....to live to stay to roam/till the cows come home...Good imagery.Thanks to the poet, you have touched the feelings of countrymen!
some fine imagery....portraying an unforgettable pair of eyes... but when i see them, , , i see a slight sense of vulnerability, that surrenders them completely to you....trustfully.
The sparkle in the eye together with the cow took me to the countryside. Deserves a 10.
You penned wondrously an expression vivid of her eyes with a '++spark++'.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
At times just a small 'spark' is adequate to light a raging fire! 10! -Raj Nandy