Speechless! Poem by Aya Nasr

Speechless!

Rating: 4.8


I have something to confess
I see myself in a big mess
My heart got lost and can't find its address
I loved him and his reaction was meaningless
He persuaded me that he is feelingless
So I did nothing but being speechless
I'm not happy nor sad but guess!
I crossed the meaning of sadness
...
You became my hardest experiences
I got that I loved an object with no senses
But in figure of human with organs and lenses
....
You can't imagine the strength of weakness
When it beat me and destroy my heart's fitness
And I do nothing but being speechless

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tony Karas 15 January 2013

Extremely well done. (((hug))) . Dunno why but nothing ever takes my ratings... I gave it a 10.

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Kanav Justa 17 January 2013

great used of similis, , , , loved it, , , , nice, , ,

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Mohammad Skati 04 February 2013

HI, AYA.IT'S A NICE POEM, BUT I LIKE TO PAY YOUR ATTENTION THAT WHEN YOU WRITE POETRY IN ENGLISH TRY TO FORGET YOUR MOTHER LANGUAGE AND TRY TO BE LIKE THE ENGLISH PEOPLE. I THINK ENGLISH WHEN I WRITE ENGLISH.THANKS.

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Patricia Grantham 24 August 2013

A lost and saddened heart can be found and made happy again.Yes we are at a lost for words when someone breaks our heart. Love will come again and will be better. Very touching.

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Abdallah Gamal 24 August 2013

Speechless! That what I feel now, it's a real piece of art, each color in this poem was chosen accurately, Keep the good work, and keep impressing us :) 10+

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Sallam Yassin 28 May 2013

Yes i believe and you believe too in love may he makes us weak in way but he makes us feel and sense life and that is speechless well done I love it thanks

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Jac Harper 25 February 2013

I believe that I have felt like this at certain (difficult) times in my life. Nicely expressed :)

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Aya Nasr 14 February 2013

mohammaed: that's the point.. : D thank you for your advice the last time i read English poem from 5: 6 years ago: D thank you all [3 [3

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