Ashraful Musaddeq

Veteran Poet - 1,233 Points (Aug 16 1958 / Bangladesh)

Sporadic Feelings 02 - Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

1. Love lust care rare cook
Wash shop manage home daily
Domestic gender

2. Orange sunbeam rains
Nipping flora and fauna
Hot chili summer

3. Sparrow crying dawn
Creeping sunbeam showing teeth
Despondent sundae

4. Dove singing summer
Cozy noon yawning forest
Muslin seduction


Comments about Sporadic Feelings 02 by Ashraful Musaddeq

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (6/7/2009 8:13:00 AM)

    Where u get thse ideas? Very very good poetry indeed. Fascinating. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/5/2009 10:15:00 PM)

    4. Dove singing summer
    Cozy noon yawning forest
    Muslin seduction
    very beautiful verses
    specially that muslin seduction
    a tenner from me
    anjali
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  • john tiong chunghoo (6/3/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    these are exciting little poems but you do see the world as a human being. reminds me of my own poem; man, the personification of nature (Report) Reply

  • (6/3/2009 9:48:00 AM)

    Friend, You are wonderful in your thought process.But I'll love to wait for a more compressed and well expressed verse. from such a strong thinker....Brishti Mazumdar (Report) Reply

  • (6/2/2009 8:19:00 AM)

    Great Haiku's........bob (Report) Reply

  • (5/29/2009 11:34:00 AM)

    Feelings and images that connect with readers in a universal way.
    The doves sing of summer in Appalachia too. Lovely, Ashraful.

    Always your friend,

    Sandra
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  • (5/27/2009 4:38:00 AM)

    Fabulous haiku's and senryus written......... great and wonderful imaginative pieces crafted upon life and nature...10++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Raj Arumugam (5/27/2009 4:27:00 AM)

    another collection of delightful short poems; 2 is my favorite. Fabulous poems! (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (5/26/2009 7:38:00 AM)

    I agree with Marie, beautifully crafted.
    CP
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  • Sadiqullah Khan (5/26/2009 12:26:00 AM)

    I liked some meanigful words which have been intricately placed in thses lines.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (5/25/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    lovely haikus again...the second one i liked most...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2009 9:13:00 PM)

    the sun and sparrow one was excellent.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 25, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 9, 2009


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