Sporadic Feelings 02 Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Sporadic Feelings 02

Rating: 3.3

1. Love lust care rare cook
Wash shop manage home daily
Domestic gender

2. Orange sunbeam rains
Nipping flora and fauna
Hot chili summer

3. Sparrow crying dawn
Creeping sunbeam showing teeth
Despondent sundae

4. Dove singing summer
Cozy noon yawning forest
Muslin seduction


the sun and sparrow one was excellent....

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Kesav Easwaran 25 May 2009

lovely haikus again...the second one i liked most...thanks...10

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Sadiqullah Khan 26 May 2009

I liked some meanigful words which have been intricately placed in thses lines.10

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C. P. Sharma 26 May 2009

I agree with Marie, beautifully crafted. CP

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Raj Arumugam 27 May 2009

another collection of delightful short poems; 2 is my favorite. Fabulous poems!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 June 2009

Where u get thse ideas? Very very good poetry indeed. Fascinating.

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Anjali Sinha 05 June 2009

4. Dove singing summer Cozy noon yawning forest Muslin seduction very beautiful verses specially that muslin seduction a tenner from me anjali

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John Tiong Chunghoo 03 June 2009

these are exciting little poems but you do see the world as a human being. reminds me of my own poem; man, the personification of nature

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

Friend, You are wonderful in your thought process.But I'll love to wait for a more compressed and well expressed verse. from such a strong thinker....Brishti Mazumdar

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Bob Blackwell 02 June 2009

Great Haiku's........bob

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