Spread Your Palm... Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

Spread Your Palm...

Rating: 5.0


Spread your palm
and place me on it,
softly like a dew-drop.
Close your fist
and your eyes
and feel me transpire.
Caress me in your dreams.
Shudder your being,
and destroy me in yourself.
Open your fist
and your eyes
and find me gone,
in faraway lands.
Spread my ashes in corners of earth
like a spirit
of forgotten ages.
Still feel me in your veins
and see my face in the wetness
on your palm,
in the glistening tranquillity.
And in the purity therein,
my soul, reflected.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pooja Ladyluck 11 November 2008

simply gr8.......a very profound tht....well written.......so b'fully xpressed.......u got gr8 talent......trust me.....ur thts.....r out of diz world......gr8 yaar......luved it! ! ! thanx....

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Indira Babbellapati 11 November 2008

can't imagine such profound thought coming from one so young as sarvesh...when i read the first few lines, i almost felt the dew-dropp in the cup of my palm!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 November 2008

This is quite extraordinary poetry. Great imagery beautiful composition to a splendid effect...........10

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 20 November 2008

Great poetry! I got lost in this one.

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Ankita Sharma 19 March 2010

this one was so interesting sort of new

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Tanvi Damle 17 March 2010

wow..i so love it! ! beyond great...srsly...realli gud!

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Reshma Ramesh 08 June 2009

wow! ! beautiful................

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Miriam Maia Padua 14 January 2009

wow...so touching.. it touched me in the way i don't know.... honestly, i cant really understand my feelings after reading this so beautiful..... SPREAD YOUR PALM..goes to my fave....10++++++++++

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Kesav Easwaran 29 November 2008

poetry at its best...an excellent piece, Sarvesh...i admire the noble thoughts behind this write...10

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