Sprightly In The Rain Poem by Captain Cur

Sprightly In The Rain

Rating: 4.8


You are a lot
like spring rain
sprightly,
refreshing,
light and dear
singularly rejoicing
within your own
sun lined drop.

Wednesday, May 22, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 16 January 2021

Beautifully painted, beautiful thoughts! .. Beautifully expressed! .. Thank you for sharing this! ..5 Stars ++++++++++++++.......................

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Patricia Grantham 05 June 2013

I love this one. Short and very lovely lines A little says a lot. thanks for sharing.

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David Wood 23 May 2013

Its better than being called a wet drip! ! Short but sweet words.

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Shahzia Batool 23 May 2013

a just simile! ! ! such is the diversity in your writing style, sometimes as literary and studded piece like Mediterraneus, and sometimes in the easy reach of a layman like me...! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 22 May 2013

And each drop is a bless, yet you are a lot as the rain...so i am wet in the rain with the rainbows and blessing down on me_Soul

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