Ssshhh! Poem by Martin O'Neill

Ssshhh!

Rating: 4.9


Slowly, softly, silently stalking
Stepping, slinking, squeezingpastthe
Shining, shimmering, scintillating
Bars of gold that threaten to
Stultify, stymie, stun into
Submission, subservience, somnolence.

A moment of lost concentration
And then
Spotted, stopped, stunned.
Momentarily squashed, squeezed and smitten.
Stumbling, stooping, slowing,
Stopping. Settling. Sleeping.
In the sunshine.
A cat.
Ssshhh!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 31 January 2017

Stopped. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 January 2017

Something a little different. And breezy. And fun. Congrats on the cat becoming Poem Of The Day.

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Geoffrey Fafard 31 January 2017

Positively purring poem Martin…I like it.Don't wake the cat….!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 January 2017

Interesting to read..... congrats on being chosen😄😄😄

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Patti Masterman 20 April 2010

Love this. Cats seem like such naive newcomers in some ways, fierce hunters though they may be.

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Christina Simmons 31 January 2017

Such imagination was used to describe this poem: by the time finished reading it I wasn't sure whether to laugh or cry - burst into tears? ? ? Congratulation for being recognise for the day!

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Clarence Prince 31 January 2017

A moment of lost concentration Stopping, Settling, Sleeping. All that said a lot!

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 January 2017

Interesting poem. Enjoyed reading.

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Tom Allport 31 January 2017

a nicely observed poem of catty antics.

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Indira Renganathan 31 January 2017

Very very interesting poem....congratulations on poet of the day

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Martin O'Neill

Martin O'Neill

Solihull, Birmingham, England
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