poet Siddartha Montik

Siddartha Montik

Still A Beauty!

Twist your lips.. twitch your eye-brows,
still you are a beauty!

change your mind.. and be as adamant, .
still you are a beauty!

Mince your words.. and make me convince,
still you are a beauty!

get me in your argument..and make me repent,
still you are a beauty!

give a big explode.. and make me plead,
still you are a beauty!

give me not any more time.. till I become sublime,
still you are a beauty!

Say it a quit.. and make it in earnest,
still you are a beauty!

make that final writ.. that we don't fit,
still you are a beauty!

for, you are a SURE beauty.! !

copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)

Topic(s) of this poem: beauty

Poem Submitted: Friday, July 31, 2009
Poem Edited: Sunday, September 17, 2017

Form: Blues Poem


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  • Suresh Kumar EkSuresh Kumar Ek (9/21/2020 6:32:00 AM)

    The poem is a SURE BEAUTY

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  • Sarah ShahzadSarah Shahzad (1/25/2020 1:01:00 AM)

    Excellent.. Nicely penned poem here, thanks for lovely sharing.. :)

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  • A B Faniki (8/31/2019 12:41:00 PM)

    A fun read and brilliant poem. I enjoyed your work. Thanks for sharing

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  • Julia Luber (2/25/2019 9:51:00 PM)

    good poem about how no matter what somebody does, she yet remains a beauty! Great!

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  • Ayan MondalAyan Mondal (2/12/2019 2:21:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful poem......

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  • Shurouk HammoudShurouk Hammoud (10/20/2018 6:56:00 AM)

    you are a sure beauty as well.so keep sharing.

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  • Marvel MarshallMarvel Marshall (10/15/2018 5:25:00 AM)

    Nice work dear poet..no matter what she does she still a beauty

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  • Charmaine J Forde (9/22/2018 5:44:00 AM)

    I love it Siddatha
    No matter what-she's still a music

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  • Safiyyah Manjra (9/17/2018 8:29:00 PM)

    Think this depicts exactly how men are smitten by women! Also how privileged some women are to be loved in such a way. A nice write, please proof read for grammar.

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (9/13/2018 1:26:00 AM)

    Such a splendid write, Siddartha.....................

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    Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion(3/30/2019 1:04:00 AM)

    Beautifully made, sir.....10+++++++++++

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  • Wes Mbanje (9/5/2018 3:00:00 PM)

    this is beauty.... thank u

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  • Tariq AlTariq Al (7/10/2018 10:57:00 PM)

    Nice write- beauty has to be timeless like that.

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  • James NnanyelugoJames Nnanyelugo (6/22/2018 8:01:00 AM)

    Never quite a beauty represented in disagreement! Wonderful show of faith, portrayed in a range of flawless stunt of words!

    Thanks for sharing, Montik

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  • Saniya GaleyevaSaniya Galeyeva (6/20/2018 8:23:00 AM)

    Beauty lies in lovers eyes? Oh, no, real beauty is seen by the lover only! Thank you for such a warm, heartfelt poem.

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  • Riza BraholliRiza Braholli (6/12/2018 12:18:00 PM)

    I read it and I walk in the beauty of feeling her thin and fragile scenes. Dr. Riza

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  • Aqua FlowerAqua Flower (6/3/2018 8:03:00 AM)

    This is a remarkable poem about love and beauty. Beauty is sometimes subline. Loving relationships have values that can push through the every day occurances in life. A wonderful write! .

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (2/2/2018 1:48:00 AM)

    Extremely well written my friend, loved reading it!

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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/22/2018 7:59:00 AM)

    Yes, true beauty is immortal.

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  • Frank AdieFrank Adie (1/18/2018 10:48:00 AM)

    A good read. Beauty has enslaved many, but is what makes the world go round.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (1/13/2018 1:10:00 AM)

    A sense of beauty in the real sense overpowered me as i was reading your poem.. such attitude is praiseworthy. a girl who gets such a man is very lucky. tony

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