Still In Death Comments

Gravity weighs on all, pulling one way as we fight against it. Live forever dear one.

nice one well expressed.. keep writing thanks.

a very composite kind of poem12 i like it so much!

A very strong and true poem

yes... this is well expressed

good write well express

strong and meaningfull lines.beautifull para, 'My clock also ticks anti from six to six But I always give my best to get it fix Only to see it stop and give me hard kicks It moves against my wish and without my...' voted10 surya

An invention of man, the downfall of man - TIC-TOC-TIC-TOC

It is natural for anyone to fight back from the death and disease. You have nicely expressed this here.

To make my end to start and my start to... very nice poem Mari

i think this is a really good poem, i also think it was just a little confusing, but that might just be me, it was good! ! ! ! ! (9)