Still In Death Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Still In Death

Rating: 4.9


I took steps ahead only to walk back
With my beats lingering on my age
That rooted deep into soil of my heart
It pulls when I push and pushes when I...

My clock also ticks anti from six to six
But I always give my best to get it fix
Only to see it stop and give me hard kicks
It moves against my wish and without my...

Path of mine too laughs and takes a turn
But I run hard, only to burn and learn
For my green land too is treading uphill
To make my end to start and my start to...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janell Cressman 24 March 2010

i think this is a really good poem, i also think it was just a little confusing, but that might just be me, it was good! ! ! ! ! (9)

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Marieta Maglas 24 March 2010

To make my end to start and my start to... very nice poem Mari

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 March 2010

It is natural for anyone to fight back from the death and disease. You have nicely expressed this here.

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Joseph Poewhit 25 March 2010

An invention of man, the downfall of man - TIC-TOC-TIC-TOC

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Surya . 26 March 2010

strong and meaningfull lines.beautifull para, 'My clock also ticks anti from six to six But I always give my best to get it fix Only to see it stop and give me hard kicks It moves against my wish and without my...' voted10 surya

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Anie Vans 25 April 2011

Gravity weighs on all, pulling one way as we fight against it. Live forever dear one.

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The Lost.. 15 April 2010

nice one well expressed.. keep writing thanks.

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Sheldon Saluta 04 April 2010

a very composite kind of poem12 i like it so much!

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Anju Addanki 31 March 2010

A very strong and true poem

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 March 2010

yes... this is well expressed

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