Stop Violence

Rating: 4.4
We have conscience,
we want paradise.
Stop violence,
it's antagonist of paradise.
Embracing individual differences,
shows we are mature.
have clear consciences
with ourselves,
for a great future.
Stop violence.
Learn patience.
Nigeria my country,
let's live in peace and unity.
Thursday, October 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: africa,nigeria
This poem was written in June 2012 by Corper Ehimika
Khairul Ahsan 04 November 2020
A good, patriotic poem. 'Stop violence, it's antagonist of paradise' - very well said, it's true! Heartiest congratulations on your poem being selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!
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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 November 2020
SO CREATED IN 2012 and SUBMITTED in 2020. CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! Great honour for Ehimika to win this Prize of PH. Is your THOUGHT still like you worded here in 2012 when you had that mandatory as a corper? An excellent self portayed poem, and so the foreign reader is informed about Nigeria through a corper's eyes. Amazingly written in a very honest way.5 stars Full Vote. To MyPoemList.
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Mahtab Bangalee 04 November 2020
yeah; paradise is the palace or the garden of peace; there is no violence; no violent human can live there; so if we are human; we have the conscience of humanity, if we are really want peaceful world then we have to stop the violence against us; we are same before the justice of God either rich or poor; congrats for being selected this poem as POD...5*****
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Mahtab Bangalee 04 November 2020
We have conscience, we want paradise. Stop violence, it's antagonist of paradise.// wow great word- violence- the antagonist of paradise;
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Akhtar Jawad 04 November 2020
Let's live in peace and unity. Violence should always be discouraged. Congrats! A nice selection as members poem.
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 November 2020
Stop violence! ! ! And live in peace! ! ! ! Following after righteous laws. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Lyn Paul 04 November 2020
Here is to peace and unity world wide.
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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 November 2020
Agreed stop violence. I get depressed to see such a beautiful country like Nigeria curtailing the freedom of its people my people African people. I suspect you are suffering from the machinations of Britain where they installed military rulers after independence. Military men belong to the barracks. As my former president Robert Mugabe said. Politics must lead the gun
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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 November 2020
A well penned piece of the day. Truly exceptional. Congrats on your featured poem...5 stars *****
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