Storm Clouds Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Storm Clouds

Rating: 4.8


Storm clouds that are black
Sprawled like cobra in the sky
They create great fear.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 31 May 2019

Nature imparts awe in you, Nature creates love in your heart, Nature is creator's art, And fear comes from unknown blue. Nature has all the rainbow colours, and more. A lovely piece.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 May 2019

Darkness! ! Black Sky! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rebecca Navarre 31 May 2019

Powerfully painted, of storms that darken skies! .. Excellent description of the way nature can be a times! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! .. 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .................+++++

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Akhtar Jawad 31 May 2019

The same clouds that have made me ecstatic in love appear now a storm black clouds making fearful. Nature is full of contrasts.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 June 2019

I love this fantastic haiku, dear Ate Rose.........10++++++++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 November 2019

An excellent little poem...pulsating expression.! My pleasure revisiting this wonderful work!

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Anjandev Roy 04 September 2019

Sprawled like cobra.......brilliant. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 June 2019

Sprawled like cobra in the sky......what a magnificent imagination! A brilliant little poem.....................10

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Kevin Patrick 09 June 2019

When taken shelter storms are a theater of gathering armies fighting in the sky, their fury rains, and their tempest blows, and they ignite thoughts of imagination. I think your one of three writers on poem hunter who are the true masters of the haiku. Well done Rose, I shall be looking for storms.

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Indira Renganathan 06 June 2019

Nature has many shades of colours...storm clouds stand for fear....nice observation Rose

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Laoag City, Philippines
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