Suicide Comments

You can never tell Bob, sometimes life after death is more beautiful, I guess so.

And so you stand on the shores of recovery a bright beacon for those who follow -God bless you Bob

A great tale of sorrow Follows suddenly.. With a touch of joy Just by that institution called marriage! ! Humm... yes... 'An institution', that's always needed Alone, man can't grow, can only groan. Dear poet, very much touched by this sad emotional saga Thank god.. you gave it a fiction end.. else...? ? ?

I love this legendary work 10+++

I walked through this pain line for line, so happy to read a happy ending - no-one understands or asks when such a time strikes - after the fact they have a lot to say but no compassion.Just think, if you did not wake.. how many people have not and missed happiness? Thought provoking this write. Thank you Bob

Oh Bob, you were lucky! A well composed story that digs deep - about anguish and alcohol and the need to escape. So glad you life gave you the chance to make a different choice. A poem written with honesty and common sense. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Bristling with honesty and intensity. Some times, as they say, the darkest hour is just before dawn. May you and yours greet the dawn of each day with joy and good thoughts. And keep the poetry coming!

There couldn't have been a better ending.. They say we control our destiny.. our life's road and journeys are what we make of them.. seems to me when the road forked.. you choose the right way.. Warmest regards.. to you Bob and the precious lady :)

Parallel lives, there but for the grace of God.................

Awesome poem mate...

Except for the last bit, this rings many bells. Quitened alarm bells perhaps. Finely composed. t x

A story that has ended well, twist from sadness to joy, well done