Monday, December 8, 2008

Summer Is Brought Upon Us Again Comments

Rating: 4.7

It's that time of year which has been brought upon us again.
We shall praise our land before us, for
The warmth and joy of summer is here again, and our will begin
To sustain.
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Dee Daffodil 21 December 2008

LOL....I was sort of wondering where the poem was going, until I got down to the last few lines.: -) Yes...You are quite correct...summer should be enjoyed while it can be...winter can be long, and cold...and desolate...and lonely...and depressing...if we let it... Hugs, dee

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Shiza Khan 20 December 2008

Dan it really is a beautiful composition..no doubt summers bring happiness.. an we shall cherish it.. :)

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Sarah Cook 20 December 2008

wow great job you do inspire other poets great job i read all your poems love them

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Chitra - 20 December 2008

Good imagery effusing the sense of warmth and life.

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Chuck Petz 18 December 2008

A very artistic tribute to the season.

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Ency Bearis 16 December 2008

great opportunity for a lovely day.. Ency Bearis

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Kevin Eaglesfield 16 December 2008

I can feel the party and the warmth and the carousing and the hollow bell that warns it's not for ever.

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Jerry Hughes 15 December 2008

..............another fine word picture Dan, well done. Cheers, Jerry

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Aiswarya. T.anish 14 December 2008

Summer time is really nice. This poem too. Like it a lot........

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Suzan Gumush 14 December 2008

The more I read your poems the more you glow. Well crafted. Best wishes Suzan Gumush

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 December 2008

When we are happy, everyday is Summer.Keep writin Dan.Nice piece.

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Ashlea Pearson 13 December 2008

Another really good poem written by you, keep writing, your good at it.

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Fred Babbin 13 December 2008

As a poet, you have a good beginning. Keep going!

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Mark Nwagwu 13 December 2008

the mystery in your works shows up here again - keep it up and your summers wqill not beckon depressing winters. Mystery is mountainous, never leaves us to fall far down into oblivion, into depression. Mark

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Chocolate Bunny 13 December 2008

Great poem. I think this is one of my favorites.

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Fiona Davidson 08 December 2008

Beautifully written words...thank you Dan

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